Here is the first draft of my complete magazine…

I still have many changes to make however, some being;

-The colour scheme on my contents page

– The pull quote on my double page spread, I will change this to ‘If the crown fits, wear it’

-The background colour on my DPS, right now I feel as though it is quite dull

Once I have made these changes, I will have have completed my draft 2 and hope to be near finishing my product. Here is the screencastify sent from my teacher, reviewing the first draft of my music magazine.