We have worked on our feedback and targets to improve and composed a draft 2.
What we changed:
- Completely changed the inside right image to a plain picture of a sunset and the clouds to add some variety
- Adjusted the whole back page as the fonts didn’t work
- Swapped the picture from page 3 to the back page
- Made the layout of the tracklist half and half, and different colours
What we are still yet to change:
- Incorporate some colour from the inside left image into the inside right image, ie. yellows, oranges, purples (somehow)
- Maybe change the font of ‘Angel Delight’ as doesn’t really fit the same theme as the tracklist
- Make the model on the front page bigger.
Here is a screencastify feedback from our teacher of our draft 2 of our digipak
Targets for improvement:
- Spine on back cover, barcode, copyright and music record company
- Change font on either back page or front to match
- Do something with 3rd page, we are going to add some colour