I feel my draft front page of my cover star clearly represents the genre pop and the bright and fun vibe I wanted to portray through the costume and it’s neon colour scheme. The props convey a narrative to the magazine and the colour of my typeface correspond to the main components of my magazine.

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This is the feedback I got from my student:

  • Need to include extra information (price, date and an addition)
  • My Masthead could be bigger
  • Change the cover line to special Grammy edition as a plug
  • The typeface of the 20+ Finalist could be changed and the weight of it
  • Could add more graphic lines and brand identity

My 5 Specific Targets :

  • Make the magazine more branded by adding graphic lines and illustrations through and around my cover star
  • Make sure the type face is sophisticated to suit the style of my magazine