Peer Feedback
- effective spacing, nothing is cramped together
- image is nice and big if main artist with an effective background
- add a border around image too add some shape as it slightly plain at the moment
Teacher feedback
- the photo has an odd placing of the satellite dish…?
- who is he?
- pull quotes?
- paragraphs
- clearer headlines…
- what is it all about?
Targets for development
- add a more variety of colours
- more quotes in bigger font
- add some drop capitals
- page numbers