Our teacher created a screen castify, giving us feedback on our draft 2 of the digipak.

Targets for improvement

• move the sun up and be bigger, looks insignificant
• add the name of the artist
• stretch the silhouette on middle panes
• add more detail/definition to white panes, looks empty
• take lyrics across two panes
• create contact, link between panes
• see more of background on back, wider border
• change colours of songs on back
• make the spacing certain-(patterned or in line)
• more sunset
• bring colour from landscape into the words
• add spine for back pane.