I drafted the article for my double-page spread. Here is my read-through of the first draft:

From this read through I created some targets for my next draft:

• Add punctuation to make it flow better.
• Check my sentence structure.
• Find some better adjectives and some synonyms for words I repeated.

Reflecting on these targets, I constructed the second draft of my article.

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My teacher provided me with some targets:

• Add punctuation to make it flow more.
• Make sure it’s clear who you’re talking about, introduce Tami Cole as a whole.