As we now have a third draft of our music video on our blogs, we were able to receive feedback from our teacher on what we need to improve upon in our next draft. This will help us reflect upon what we can continue to improve in our next drafts.

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Targets for Improvement –

  • At the beginning of performance aspect we need to have a close up of our star. This is so that our audience feels involved from the start of the video.
  • The dip to white transition that is used when the curtains are opened, needs to be longer.
  • We need to create more of a connection to the audience during our performance scenes, we could do this through the use of close ups.
  • When uploading our video, there is a recurrent issue which in turn causes our lip syncing aspect to go out of time. We need to correct this issue with the guidance of the creative team from specsavers.
  • We need to ensure that we edit to the beat more frequently.
  • When the gown is thrown at the camera, the transition needs to be longer than it currently is for better effect.
  • During our party scene we need to look at canting some of the images for more excitement.
  • More variety is needed during the flashing scenes, to do this we need to alter the colours in the effects panel.
  • We need to add a clip of our actor arriving home as well as including a close up of her lighting the candle.
  • Slow down the fade out on the ending so it doesn’t feel as rushed.