I have chosen these adverts to be in my magazine as I feel they would best suit my genre of Pop. I also believe that these adverts are the best for my target audience as the audience I focused on ranges from 20 to 30 year old’s who are interested in fashion, beauty and travel. I chose the Adele advert as she was one of the artists that I used to create my audience profile and she very popular within my chosen genre. I have also chosen a L’Oréal advert as my target audience’s interests included skincare and beauty so it fits the demographic and physiographic that I am aiming to create with my magazine.

Front Cover:

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What I have changed:

• The masthead is taller
• Added colour to my cover lines
• Made my cover lines bigger
• Added lines

Contents Page:

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What I have changed:

• Added a border
• Changed the colour of my headlines
• Changed the background colour

Double Page Spread:

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What I have changed:

• Added a drop capital
• Added a pull quote
• Captioned my photo to anchor it
• Added a border

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Summary of my targets:

Front Cover:

• Give model a smile with liquefy
• Play with cover lines – make them stand out (change colours, put them in a box, change height and size)
• Change font – blockier (sans serif)

Contents Page:

• Caption photo of my models – name them
• Add punctuation & check spelling
• Try a different font – funkier
• Make ‘Horizon Pop’ smaller

Double Page Spread:

• Move contents page photo to double page spread
• Try Pull Quote in italics
• Try a different font on headline – make it bigger and taller
• Try a different font

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This is the second draft of my Double Page Spread. I have acted upon my reflection of my first draft in order to make my second draft better.

The changes I have made:

• I’ve included a By Line
• Added my article about my artist
• Changed the headline to better fit my article

What I could still improve:

• Add a pull quote
• Add a caption to anchor my image
• Add a border to my article
• Possibly add a background colour

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This is the second draft of my contents page for my music magazine. I have changed parts of the page based on my reflection of my first draft.

The changes I have made:

• Changed the Layout
• Added Lines to create depth
• Added another image
• Added a page number

What I could still improve:

• Add a Border
• Change the placement and colour of my logo
• Change the background colour
• Add a plug

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This is the second draft of my front cover for my music magazine. I have changed parts of the cover based on my reflection of my first draft.

The changes I have made:

• Moved my coverlines from the right to the left of the page
• Changed the colour of my background
• Changed some of my coverlines

What I could still Improve:

• Change the colour of my coverlines to make them stand out more
• Make my masthead larger
• Try a different Typeface
• Add more colour
• Add Lines

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3 Things I like about my double page spread:

• The layout of my image and text
• The images used and how its been edited.
• The size of my Heading and Headline

5 Things I can include in my double page spread to make it better:

• By line – who wrote the article
• Caption on the photo to anchor it
• My Article about the artist
• Pull Quote
• Change the Headline – make it more interesting