Music Video Draft 2

This is our 2nd draft of our music video. Quite a lot has changed from the 1st draft and we have made quite a lot of progression since. Our video is now full length and has a narrative and performance we have edited the whole thing thoroughly using editing techniques such as the colour grade and filter. I think that the genre is represented well through Mise-en-Scene. There are still some things that we need to do however we have the bulk of the filming completed and there are just a couple of things that we want to change in post production.

Some things that we want to change include…

• making the narrative more clear

This is because the idea of the narrative becomes less prominent throughout. It can be changed by just adding a couple of short, match on action shots (such as a braking shot) which would represent what was actually happening using media language

• Shot length

Some shots last a bit too long and reduce the pace of the video, which is not the pace that we are aiming for. We are thinking of adding some close ups to the video in between shots to make the video more fluent. Specifically some of the performance shots.