Music Video Draft 3

This is our third draft of our music video. As we develop our drafts it tends to change less as all we have done is fine tuned the post production side of things. We have moved some of the clips around in order to make the narrative make more sense to a watcher. We have also worked on things such as pacing, for example, cutting some of the clips shorter and adding in performance clips in between clips in an attempt to make the video a better watch, as before some of the clips dragged on. We still aim to change some of this and continue to change small things that will make a big difference to the quality of the video.

We were tasked with peer assessing another groups work and make suggestions on what we think that they should change. This is what our peers said about our video…

Upon receiving this feedback,  I think that all the suggestions are valid and we now will aim on changing these things for draft 4. We also have some more filming that we want to do, some match-on-action shots will help in providing more pace to the video and continuity.

Overall, I believe that we have successfully portrayed the narrative through media language such as mise-en-scene and body language. I believe we have done a good job in portraying our stars as casual, everyday men however still creating the extraordinary perception of the band members.