Teacher Feedback – Screencastify
This is our teacher feedback on our draft 4 of our music video. Some valid points were made to improve the watchability of our music video.
Some of the positives that we took from this…
- Starts slow then speeds up after key action point
- Continuity through the beginning sequence
- Stopping sequences with action shot of break work
- Outside solo-guitar shots work well
- Shots of breaking, accelerating etc work well
Some of the things suggested to work on are…
- Around 30s into the video, we need to fill some times when we are awkwardly looking away from the camera which reduces the pace of the video. It is an easy fix and we can add a performance shot in of guitar/ drums.
- Replace some of the guitar shots in the house with the new instrumental shots e.g in front of graffiti/ garage door
- Add some more shots of George (drummer) throughout the video as there is not as much of him as the other two.
- Zoom in onto the Boss when he arrives at the house. ( close up on him out of breathe)