My teacher viewed my groups third draft and sent us this screencastify:

Here are some points that she made:

• During chorus go back to main singer to get connection with him
• Alternate between high and low angle with drumming to increase pace of edit
• Use more close ups of Nate during the chorus
• Odd cut at 1:40
• Chorus holds one shoot for a while
• Someone’s singing in audio but not in video
• Jump cut of logs is good
• Differenta angles is good
• Reverse dolly shot of drumming and use it again
• Pan up- cut before you see nate isn’t singing amd loop
• Increase pace of edit
• Sort out bits were Nate isn’t singing
• Add more pov shots

This feedback is very useful and will be used to allow us to make our fourth draft as good as we can.