My teacher viewed my groups third draft and sent us this screencastify:
Here are some points that she made:
- During chorus go back to main singer to get connection with him
- Alternate between high and low angle with drumming to increase pace of edit
- Use more close ups of Nate during the chorus
- Odd cut at 1:40
- Chorus holds one shoot for a while
- Someone’s singing in audio but not in video
- Jump cut of logs is good
- Differenta angles is good
- Reverse dolly shot of drumming and use it again
- Pan up- cut before you see nate isn’t singing amd loop
- Increase pace of edit
- Sort out bits were Nate isn’t singing
- Add more pov shots
This feedback is very useful and will be used to allow us to make our fourth draft as good as we can.