Shown above is my complete magazine draft with below a screen cast which my teacher has made assessing my complete draft.

The feedback from my teacher overall included many targets and ideas of how I can make my magazine bolder, my targets for improvement are as follows:

Front cover

• Pull down plug,also only chose one plug as there are two.
• Masthead needs capital corrections
• Make main cover line bigger
• Add price and edition
• Photo adjusting: up contrast and twist image

Contents page 

• Un strech pictures
• Break up the coverlines
• Fill up space at bottom
• Page number
• Suggestions: use plainer font, better photo for Louis, description underneath

Double page spread 

• Photo is stretched, unstretch it
• Standfirst needs to be moved to article
• Add a drop capital at start
• Suggestions: Space out lines on quote, page  umber higher
• Correct hyphens

Overall from my feedback I have a lot of tweaking to do in order for my magazine to be the best it can be.