Here is the third draft of our music video as you can see I have made the following changes:

• A bigger variety of shots
• Filmed more footage
• Added more props to help support the narrative and themes of the song
• Enhanced the colour saturation while editing

We showed our video to our peers and collected the following targets and positive feedback on what to keep:

• Add borders for effect, to make the video more appealing to the eye
• The colours of the toys stand out well and enhance the vibrancy of the video
• Lip syncing is slightly off in some shots
• Add more interseting narrative to keep the viewer entertained

Moving forward I think it is important that we add more interesting footage to make the video as exciting as we can, by using and adding a different setting other than the studio and classroom, telling our character to move round more (add more movement) and experiment more with effects and finally adjust the lip syncing more.