1st Draft of Content Page
The contents page in a magazine is very important in order to give the audience an insight into what the magazine is about once they pick it up. My contents page in my metal music magazine gives my audience an idea of what they will be reading with a small description to give enough information to spike interest, whilst not giving too much away.
CONTENTS PAGE PEER ASSESSMENT
- What type of shots have been used to create a variety of shot distances and how has the camera been used to communicate meaning? A mid shot is used in order to capture both the position of the model as well as the chosen costume to convey its relation to the genre. This demonstrates an understanding of positioning and lighting which results in an image that is conventional to the metal genre with a clear display of body language.
- What choice of Mise en scene is appropriate for the star image and genre? The outfit worn by the star is plain yet is appropriate for the metal genre with the dark tones contrasting the pale skin of the model creating a melancholic aura conventional to the genre. The positioning of the models hand displays the jewelry and proxemics whilst maintaining an aspect of mystery as the models entire face is not visible.
- How far is the font used readable and reflects the genre? The bold, sans serif font is clearly legible and generates an aspect of volume representative of the music found within the genre however lacks variety as the same font is used both for headlines and body text which leads to a lack of variety in graphic design.
- What technical conventions of a Contents page are present and used effectively? The lexis used within the headlines is conventional to the genre and all conventions of a contents page have been made use of with the dark background contrasting nicely with the lighter tones of the headlines and heading of the page.
- How has Indesign been used to layout the page to convey a brand? The layout of the page leaves a generous yet appropriate amount of space for headlines and body text and the space available has been maximised in order to create a product that is fulfilling but not overbearing which would drive the reader away.
- How well have the text and visuals been integrated together? The colour palette of the images and text parallel nicely with contrasting tones and there is an appropriate amount of space consumed by both text and images ensuring one is not overpowering the other.
- Where has photoshop been used to manipulate the photos to enhance the star image or genre? Photoshop has been used well to sharpen jewellery and highlight key tones however the cutting out of the model is rough with the original background still visible resulting in a more unprofessional look however the lighting used is fitting for the genre as half the model is still cast in shadow furthering the aspect of mystery.
- How is the language used appropriate for the genre and target audience? The language used is appropriate for the genre and the target audience will be able to identify it with the use of alliteration of ‘Live and Loud!’ connoting high intensity music which the target audience will associate with the genre further drawing them into the product.
Clearly, strong, good, satisfactory, conventional, well good sense, B grade
5 Targets
- Cut out model better
- Change some fonts to add variety
- Add image into box
- Replace placeholder text
- Edit the photo with Photoshop