In my second draft I amended the main points I wrote on the DPS Draft 1 post.

Things I changed…

• I changed the place holder text to the biographies of the artists.
• I added a byline and drop capital for the standfirst.
• I also changed the questions and first line of standfirst to a different font (the same as the title) and made them bigger so they popped.
• Lastly I added ‘The Duet’ on the second page to fill in the space.

To Change…

• Although ‘THE DUET’ fills the space I feel it might not work as I also introduce them on the bottom of the page on the piano keys.