Introduction

Once me and my partner had felt like we had gotten to a good enough stage with our posts we decided to use what we have so far as our first draft. We then compared our first draft to an assessment criteria to see what our strengths are and what areas we need to improve or include on our page.

Here are some images of our first draft of the social media page:

Here is my comparison of our draft 1 against the successment criteria:

Reflection

After assessing the first draft of our social media page against the success criteria I found that we have no major problems with the design coherence except for maybe the fact that all of the highlights include the same design for the cover image which just seems a bit repetitive and unimaginative. The content, timeline, promotion of live events, call to action, interaction, physical copies and issues have been all successfully included within the social media page. What I really want to work on for my second draft is including a better use of cross media convergence and synergy than just a collaboration and would be nice to think of a film or game that could include some of our artists songs on. Not only this but the main criteria we are missing is presenting our star as both ordinary and extraordinary. We have already proven our artist is extraordinary but we also need to have some more exposed photos of the artist that include him being by himself or practising a different hobby in spare time etc…