Final Draft – Music Video

Introduction

Finally after a very long process we have finished our music video ‘Introspective’. After adding in final greenscreen footage, colours, effects, transitions etc we have decided that we are proud and happy to now present our complete work!

Reflection

Now that the green screen footage has all been assembled together and filled in our missing gaps, our story line now fully making sense and runs smoothly. This green screen footage was essential to create a sense of journey for the audience members to understand. I went through and tried to tinker round and shift some videos lengths and placements ever so slightly to ensure that they were transitioning on beat. I also added some fade in effects or match cuts to help create transitions to differentiate different stages of the journey or different scenes altogether. Particically at the start of the music video I tweaked the saturation and brightness down to create a dim, dreary and depressing atmosphere to reflect the office worker’s lonely and overwhelming work life in order to illustrate that this worker is in a current dark place in her life. Once this chair comes to life I yet again used some special effects such as deformation of the shot, variety of different flashing colours and increasing brightness which portrays this worker who is going through a spinny and surreal experience, feeling a range of different emotions such as shock, delusion, disbelief, nervousness, excitement, confusion, curiosity etc… After the worker is finally set of on the road I then dimmed down the colours and brightness again to represent the passing of all that comotion and to reflect back to the fact that this worker is still overwhelmed feeling stressed and tired and probably just in worry about the past events shown in the music video linked to work. Throughout this music video, after each encounter we see the brightness and saturation slowly increase which resembles her recovering slowly and learning how to let go, enjoy and embrace all that is around her. One thing that was a goal of ours that we never ended up achieving was applying effects using Adobe After Effects. This was thought about long and hard but we believed that we had already achieved a lot in this music video and there was already a lot that was going on. We came to the conclusion that the aesthetic we went for juxtaposed the ‘professional’ world of editing and filmography, where now technology has been improved to make effects and film look so real and so perfect that that is what is deemed quality and of high standards. We had already filmed the footage for this video with a very old film camera so it was only fitting to continue this rebellion that differentiates from typical music video quality used now a days and applied it the the editing standards too and wasn’t about making it look to perfect and flashy as that is not what the message of our music video is trying to send instead our message is to understand that we are human beings who we not put on this planet to just accept and conform to anything and everything that society pushes onto us.

 

   

 

Peer Assessment

Introduction

For our draft 3 we had another media student peer assess our work to get another point of view from them about what they enjoy  and what needs improving. Here is my feedback from my peer:

Reflection

From my peers feedback it seems that he liked the costume, star image and camera movement/angles/variety. However the music video seems to have a lot of areas that need improving. The main this that is being brought up again and again is the gaps in the music video for where we need to add some new footage with is our first our main prioty. Hopefully once adding in special effects, filters, colours, transitions etc there will be a lot more going on in the video to drive the attention away from some of the more awkward acting and also build up the right aesthetic we need. After that I need to focus attempting to stabalize some of my clips on Premiere Pro as well as going through and touching up all the clips so that they are perfectly switching on beat.

Draft 4 – Music Video

Introduction

After finally getting all the rest of the footage we needed for the music video we have nearly managed to finish assembling together everything so far to almost create a full narrative that will hopefully now start to make a lot of sense for the viewers. Here is our draft 4 for our music video:

Whats New?

  • We now have added in the missing footage for the office scene, chair coming to life scene and reaction shots.
  • We also have includes a few more affects such as some overlaying videos during the rave scene. I did this buy placing two different reaction shots in our timeline directly over each other and slightly turning down the opacity of one of the clips.
  • We also continued doing some adjustments of colours and placement of clips to get it more in sync with the beat.

Reflection

Our music video is really starting to come together and make sense. We now need to intertwine our studio footage of the office worker on her office chair in front a green screen with our moving footage of the road to make her look like she is moving. After that we will need to assemble the greenscreen footage into our music video to finally fill in our gaps to have a consistent run of clips throughout. We also plan to really crack down on adding in different effects throughout the video and even start using the Adobe After Effects to start including patterns and stripes of colours. Next we will need to focus on all our transitions to help establish a new scene or location. Lastly we will go through one more time to add any touch ups such as ensuring every transition is on beat and perfecting our effects etc…

 

Teacher Screen Castify Feedback

Introduction

Not only were we given feedback from Specsaver workers but have been given some pointers in a screen castify over our music video made by our media teacher Mr Gregson. Here is our screen castify from our media teacher:

Our Strengths

  • Sir enjoyed our stop motion clips and thought they were very effective.
  • He also enjoyed our performance shots and the lighting was also much better in these than other clips.
  • We had included some good camera movement. E.g. when the first dancer moves his hands move one way and the camera spins the opposite way which makes the audience feel they are dancing with the video.
  • Mr Gregson also enjoyed the variety of different camera angles we used such as the Point of View shot when the office worker put on the glasses in the forest and you saw what the glasses looked like as if you were looking through them.

 What Needs Improving

  • We need to film the footage needed to fill in the gaps as we miss the background information of how the office worker came about on this journey.
  • Sir also pointed out that in our first encounter we needed to include a reaction shot of the office worker.
  • He also suggested we play around with the colour and brightness/contrast of our clips as there are some dull looking clips.
  • There is a particular clip during the first encounter that is too long compared to the other clips which makes it seem out of place.

Reflection

After receiving feedback from both my media teacher and the Specsavers’ employees I now have clear aims that I need to achieve in order to improve my music video these main goals that I need to focus forward are:

  • Complete filming our office scene, green screen footage and back alley scene, so that we can assemble the footage together so that at least we have a complete video that you can watch all the way through.
  • Use lumetri colours to adjust the saturation etc in order to fit our genre of music better making it colourful and bright.
  • Add in the reaction shot within the first encounter.
  • Shorten the clip within the first encounter by either playing round with the scale and proportion to make it look as if there is camera movement within the clip (so there is a little more going on that and long shot), or I could shorten the clip and add in some reaction shots of the dancer.
  • Start including transitions and effects. – Possibly even use the format Adobe After Effects to achieve an even more trippy video.
  • Use curves to tweak the contrast and brightness as it is a more specific way than just boosting the overall brightness/contrast.

Specsavers’ Feedback – Draft 3

Introduction

Friday 30th we had people from Specsavers to come in and watch our draft 3, so we could get some advice on our music video so far. We were given up to half an hour with one creative proffesional who specializes in film and editing videos. These people would help us understand our strengths and what we could improve on to make it even better, and hopefully teach us some editing and effect uses. The proffesional who sat down with us and assed our music video was called Lenny.

What Lenny liked about our music video

Lenny enjoyed our music video saying that it had a very indulging narrative that kept you intertained throughout. He was impressed of how many different clips had been incorparated into the video and the order of these clips as well. Lenny pointed out that the clips fast speed and short lengths complimented the type of song we had chosen really well and changed well with the rythm and beat of the music. He throughoughly enjoyed our stop motion clips and said we had some good camera movement that mad the music video feel fun and excting.

What Lenny advised about our music video

Firstly Lenny noted there was such a big consistency of short snappy clips meaning to odd few clips that were prolonged seemed a little too tedius compared to the rest of the footage making those clips feel a little awkward therefore he suggested we needed to shorten these clips. He also noted that we needed to play around with the brightness, saturation and contrasts of each clip as filming on an old film camera has resulted in a lot of dark footage.  When presentiung to video to Lenny we still had a lot of gaps of footage in our music video from missing footage that we still need to film so the obvious and massively important task is to get that footage shot and assembled into the video. He also showed us a lot of intriguing effects that we could apply and play around with to add that trippy and surreal touch that we were looking to apply.

Reflection

In order to help the music video flow better Lenny suggested we played around the position and scale on a prolonged clip that he presented to us. This clip featured the woman’s first encounter where the office worker is handed a speaker. By playing around with the position and scale we can zoom into the office worker and then get a reaction shot of the dancer to ensure that the clip provides a range of shots instead of staring at a long shot that provides all the content we need and therefore there is no use of it needing to drag for so long. A vital step we need to do is film the rest of the footage we need to be able to fill in our gaps within the music video, luckily we know exactly what shots, costumes, locations, lighting, makeup, etc, that we need so all that needs to be decided is when this is gonna get done by. Lenny directed us to ‘Lumetri Colours’ which allowed us to sellect what ever clip we wanted and dabble with the saturation, highlights/shadows and even colouring tints to select over. Our aim is to firstly boost the brightness, contrasts and saturation of these clips and then afterwards we can then begin adding colourful tints and effects found in ‘Video Effects’. The video effect provide you with many different options that you can apply to your music video such as dissolve, distorting, etc… Overall I am very happy that Lenny found the video encaptervating as I really wanted to make sure it would hold peoples attention and not be overly repetitive. I am also very grateful for all the tips and advice on the music video and feel eagar to get to work.

Music Video Draft 3

What Went Well

  • We have managed to inlcude many different camera movements such as ped, pans etc… The camera movement reflects the audience is dancing along with the music. The up beat electronic dance music is exstremerly fast paced and was simply designed for people to be encouraged to get up a boogie all night long, therefore there is a lot of camera movement within the music video on purpose elevate the rush when you mix what you hear with what you are seeing. We made sure we wanted this music video to contastly keep changing up to keep the viewers glued and feeling engaged.
  • We also made sure we included a huge variety of shot distances to help the audience to establish everything in the scene and been drawed attention to important features which we want them to notice. Doing this also helps make scenes more exciting so the viewer does not loose interest in what they are watching, meaning there aren’t prolonged clips of a whole scene without any change up. Since our music is so snappy we have needed to add fast snappy clips create this pursonna that there is a lot going on, both physically within the song as well as metaphorically since the journey that the office worker has been take on is also clearly a lot for her to be feeling and taken in as well.
  • There are a couple of shot transitions which run smoothly between the iffice workers journey and the clips of her performing alone in the woods by  herself. For example there is a ped up at the end of the first encounter which then transitions to a pan across the sky to a new location in the forest which establishes a new location where the office worker will be relaxed and dancing. This transition also is very clever as it contrasts the alley way before hand.
  • Although there are some minor blimps that need to be sorted, overall most of the footage is on time with the beat and follows the rythm nicely, we have included many short clips meaning that there are sections of clips that change frequently each time you hearevery individial coupleof beats.

What Needs Improvement

  • As we filmed off a very old camera, this meant things such as the composition and depth of field etc could not really be thought into as our camera did not allow us to  play around with these sort of features. However we used the bad quality to an advantage as it reminds us of the era of 1970’s-1990’s where the era was trippy and phycodelic and the camera quality looked like this therefore since we are trying to achieve this spinny sorty of aesthtic  the camera quality has not totally let us down.
  • We have added some minor video effects but have only just touched the surface and have been experimenting. So far we haven’t explored much at all, or atleast not diven as deep into editing yet as we would like to, this will be a vital part for our music video.
  • The fact that the rave scene has been added at the end means the the mes-en-scene has now got some sort of indication of electronic dance music, however there hasn’t been any actual footage of a dj, it’s more of lighting and people dancing.
  • The narrative is still missing very vitial chunks such as the office scene and back alley scene so currently this music video still doesn’t make too much sence.

Focus Forward

  • The is so many different effects and transitions we need to add in in order to create this spinny almost phycodellic kind of journey. Electronic music is vibrant and makes people dance hard and feel free so vaireties of shapes and colours will help the audience to associate the music video with the genre of the song because if you want something to stand out or look crazy, you make that work colourful which will add to the adbunace of everything that going on, which is a lot. Some of our footage also needs to be brightend as most of our footage due to the old camera we used was rather dark and dull which would not be the right atmosphere for some of our scenes as we want some scenes to be uplifted and happy therefore a dark and dull piece of footage would simply juxtapose this. We really need to get to filming the office scene footage, backalley footage, and greenscreen footage as right now the narrative does not make much sense and we really need to focus purely on editing and effects as that is so important to get done for our music video, its not just a case of tidy things up when it comes to editing its a case of crerating this sureal journey.

Music Video Draft 2

Here is my self assessment for my Draft 2:

What Went Well:

  • We managed to get a range of visually pleasing/engaging shots with lots of camera movement.
  • We also used a variety of shot distances ranging from extreme long shots all the way to extreme close up.
  • A series of montages has been included to depict time passing throughout the long journey of the office worker.
  • There is proficent syncing and editing that reflects the rhythm of the music, however this is still not perfect and need some work.

What Needs Improving:

  • Some camera shots look a little shaky.
  • We haven’t really used any effects yet which is something that will be vital for our video.
  • Our editing for our narritive isn’t quite pieced together enough yet. Therefore the narrative may seem very confusing at this present moment.
  • The mes-en-scene costume choice for this video doesn’t exactly scream electronic dance music neither does a lot of the acting and makeup.

Focus Forward

In order to stabillise the shaky camera footage I need to use the warp stabilizer effect tool on Adobe Premiere Pro. Before even thinking about effects I need to finish encorporating all the footage to create the scenes and make sense of the storyline. All though the costume, acting and makeup may not remind you of the genre electronic dance this is not really relevant as our music video is purely narrative, meaning things may have been different if we had done a performance shoot. When thinking about electronic dance music, this trippy, quirky, colourful and edgy illastration comes to mind and takes you on a journey. This is why the storyline is focused on an office worker who is too on this journey. The old film camera may not be the best quality, but this displays an edgy aethestic emphasising this spinny journey and highlighting that this music video is not typically conventional, as quality is viewed as a vital feature that projects a proffesional piece. This therefore reflects the electronic dance genre as it hugely contrasts traditional music such as classical. The series of montages and stop motion is breaking away from tradion which expects order, this is to connot there is not much sense of time, just like when you are in a dream state and therefore establishes this surreal journey through the eyes of the office worker. Finally special effects will be essiential to depict the trippy illastrations and transitions  that will truly bring the entire music video together.

Shoot 2 Reflection (narrative)

Introduction

For our second shoot we shot on the sixth form site using one of the IT rooms and outside by building. This shoot went a lot smoother as we has prepared shots lists and had a really good idea of what we wanted to do and bring. My partner Archie gathered the camera and tripod as well two other actors for this shoot whom he informed what to wear, as I focused on planning all the shots and the office womens hair, makeup and costume. Here are some images from the shoot:

What Went Well

  • We had a shot list ready which made the experiance feel timeless and run smoothly.
  • We managed to get a range of shots from different distances and angles as they had been thought through thouroughly.
  • We felt extremerly confident and had everything mapped out so we didn’t loose our sense of direction.
  • We managed to improvise with the scene where the chair comes to life which still is a really good idea provided it was not our orgional plan.
  • We wanted to have low key lighting in the IT room so we shut the blinds. I also brang a black mesh piece of fabric to go over the camera for specific shots when we wanted enhance the darkness to reflect this women feeling overwhelmed and hopeless.

What Went Wrong

  • Unfortunately we had an issue at the very start, as there was a problem with the sim card in the camera so we has to waste some time by having to go and get another sim card.
  • The actors were told to come in black suits and tie, however one was checkered and one was navy. On top of this I had forgotten my blazer but luckily my partner bought a spare one for me. Obviously this isn’t a major issue as the old camera footage didn’t pick up the suits colour and detail that much.
  • We also managed to loose time when we realized that we had lost our exit sign that was to be put on the wall outside the building, so I had to run and print one off. This also didn’t manage to stick very well on the wall and after looking back in the shots the sign becomes slanted.
  • We didn’t end up getting a smoke machine in the end to create the effect that the office chair was coming to life.
  • Lastly since we ended up filming into lunch time it was difficult to not get shots with students in the back as people where constantly walking past.

Reflection

Overall I believe that this shoot went more smoothly and less stressfull than our first one. I think our use of camera shots have improved and will be much more easier to talk about since the thought of each shot conveying different meanings has really been broken down and thought through. I am also proud of the improvisations with the mesh material and chair coming to life. I think me and my partner we much better communicating and coorporating together. Even though we felt organised with what we were actually doing our preparation in terms of costume and checking everything was good to go such as the exit sign and camera was very poor and we must not forget to be more considerate in the future.

Risk Assessment For Shoot 2

Here is my and my partners risk assement for our second shoot:

Reflection

By doing this risk assessment we have been able the acknowledge any dangers that could be a threat to our shoot. This will help us to brainstorm what we need to look out for and be aware of, which are helpful routines that are beneficial to get into the habbit of doing, so that filming is always gareenteed to run smoothly with no dilemmas/obstacles and everyone is well protected and safe. Luckily for our second shoot we have established that none of these risks are to worry about.

 

Production Meeting Agenda For Shoot 2

Introduction

For our second shoot our aims are to film our opening office scene and our back alley scene where our character in the narrative finds the office chair. Here is our production meeting agenda for our second shoot:

Reflection

For the female office worker, we chose to keep her costume very basic and stereotypical. We want to make sure to get the female’s costume hair and makeup very identical to the first shoot when she was in this outfit including her messy bun and tired makeup. The other two workers will be men in a classic black suit with a balck tie. This was in order to limit the excitement and relay the orderly, robotic workplace that does not promote creativity or individualism. We also decided that we wanted low key lighting so that the workplace would feel even more dull and dreary. This scene has been decided between me and my partner to be shot in an ICT room at the grammar school. This so that the office workers can be sat in a line at typing away on their PC’s. Costume, Makeup, props and finding the male office workers will be left down to me and my partner Archie, will be responsible for bringing and setting up the camera, tripod and lighting.