June
17
Pitch + Feedback
Final Pitch
Feedback
https://youtu.be/QIP-yIXYrig
Positives
- has a good narrative
- simple and effective
- relates to the target audience
- a powerful video idea
- dark tones from lighter tones
- developed and interesting narrative
- idea of shots is good
- idea of production plan is good
Targets
- add a stronger sense of symbolism
- categorize it into a thriller of obsession
- make it more relatable to the audience
- bigger sense of obsession
- reflect how people are blind to reality
- images of facial features to connote virtual image
- develop the narrative
- keep audience demographic in mind