Here is my first complete magazine draft:

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My teacher has provided me with some very helpful feedback. Here are her comments:

A summary of my teachers’ comments:

• Good coherency throughout.
• Like the fonts on the front cover.
• Introduce another colour to the front page eg. on the pug.
• Add this extra colour to the contents page – alternate colour boxes for the page numbers.
• Add the artists names to their images on the contents page.
• Headlines on the contents page to be bigger and bolder.
• Like the social media icons.
• Move the headline on the DPS over to the left and move the byline to the other side of the triangle.
• Check the line spacing.
• The line for the second image could be in one of the colours from the flowers.
• Add an arrow to the read on at the end of the article.