09
Oct
2015
Oct
2015
Music Video – Narrative Draft – Feedback – Targets
categories: Production
After we published our Narrative Draft we began collecting feedback. Below is some feedback collected from the comment section of the YouTube video.
Feedback:
Cameron Le Page:
“I think the shots are good, and a clear narrative can be identified. I like the progress within the narrative with the different sections, however I feel that the shots of James shaking and nodding his head look blurred and could be changed. I think that if your performance matches this with its energy the outcome will be great.”
Here is a screenshot of the comment.
Overview:
- Shots are good
- Clear identifiable narrative
- Progress within narrative is effective
Targets:
- Shot of James shaking his head are blurry, alter them
- Add an energetic and lively performance aspect