For draft 3 we had to go back and review the feedback given by our teacher and make the necessary changes in order to drastically improve the video. Draft 2 didn’t portray a clear storyline and with that we have been able to improve the understanding by removing old clips and adding new ones that clearly state the contrast of emotions and actions

What Went Well:

• We have developed the use of our original transitions
• Have included more clips that correlate to the narrative
• The costumes work well with the genre

What To Improve:

• We must stabilize a number of shots
• We need to ensure that all the lip syncing is in time
• We need to make the necessary changes to our narrative to make it clear