Below is the second draft of the front cover of my music magazine. I am happier with this version because I have taken my targets and feedback on board to create something that both  I and other people like.

Things I have improved; 

• I chose a different image of my cover star so that I was able to change that background and brighten up the image.
• I then cut out the photo and did change the background to pink because I think it goes with the theme of the writing and the MES of my model.
• I changed the front of my masthead to make it more modern and I added a plug to the top of my magazine which will hopefully attract my audience to my magazine.
• I also changed the captions to make some of them shorter and more to the point because short and simple is better.