This is the second draft of my contents page for my magazine and I have taken on board the feedback that I got and have changed the following things;

• I added a plug to attract more attention towards my magazine.
• I made the number pages bigger than the cover lines to add definition to them and make them stand out.
• I added dots either side of my ‘contents’ to make it more bold.
• I added a small logo of my magazine which I got from the masthead from my front cover.
• I changed the shade of pink to make it match my front cover and make them work together a bit more.
• I changed some of the cover lines to make them more about music and my genre.

Overall, I am happy with the second drat of my contents page because I think that it goes with my genre which is pop and it also goes well with my front cover which means that my magazine will look good when it is finished.