This is the new draft of my double page spread:

What changed?

• I turned my background into a gradient and pulled it across the page to make it look more like the pages are connected to each other
• I added more cover lines
• I took out the stand first that wasn’t needed
• I turned my cover lines white and put a red outline on them
• I changed the font of my article
• I changed the font of my credits to the photographer and writer
• I changed the last name of my star and moved both first name and surname to fit in the middle of each page
• I outlined REBIRTH with red

Targets:

• I will take photos of my own roses to use
• I will take pictures of rose petals and have them falling down the page
• I will cut out my model again and edit her to look more dramatic
• I will center my cover lines more
• I will make my model bigger