September
26
Teacher Feedback – screen castify
Summary:
- play with effects and transitions to create more interest on screen
- include more close up and extreme close up shots to create intensity
- move the star so that she isn’t in the centre of the screen the whole time
- use close ups of hands and arms to distract from the out of time dancing
- more cuts between shots some shots are too long
- use effects 3 times
- make sure sequencing is chronological – some doesn’t make sense
- create jump cuts for interest
Targets:
- add in more effects and ensure that they are in at least 3 times for the comfort of the audience
- use more shots and angles – some are too long and the interest is lost
- include more close up shots of hand movements and include movement through the frame
- include some more obvious jump cuts
- adapt the pace of edit to fit the tension in the frame