Draft 3 of my music video:

What has changed:

• We have added more edits
• We have made everything in chronological order
• played  with effects and transitions to create more interest on screen
• included more close up and extreme close up shots to create intensity
• moved the star so that she isn’t in the centre of the screen the whole time
• used close ups of hands and arms to distract from the out of time dancing
• more cuts between shots – some shots were too long
• use effects 3 times
• created jump cuts for interest
• added in more effects and ensure that they are in at least 3 times for the comfort of the audience
• used more shots and angles – some are too long and the interest is lost
• included more close up shots of hand movements and include movement through the frame
• included some more obvious jump cuts
• adapted the pace of edit to fit the tension in the frame

Five youtube comments from peers:

Targets:

• colour correction
• make flowers pop
• get rid of some effects too overcrowded
• fix inside shapes
• shaky shots fix
• make the storyline more clear