Now I’ve designed my double page spread with the placeholder text, I can now insert my real article. I have edited it lots and now it’s improved; here is my new improved feature article.

What have I changed?

-Changed the last paragraph, removed bits that didn’t necessarily fit such as talking about future family

– Added information about merchandise

– Corrected a lot of spelling mistakes especially ‘Indie-Pop’

-I adjusted my pull quote so the article doesn’t sound so arrogant.

All these corrections will enable my article to flow well when I insert it onto my double page spread. I will also change the colours of my questions on InDesign to match the colour scheme on my DPS, apart from that my article is finished.