I asked my classmates for feedback on how my double page spread looked and what could be improved. I haven’t used my true article text in my draft however as I am still finalising it, so for now I have just inserted placeholder text to show how my real text will look. Here is a screenshot of my first draft of my double page spread.

I’ve put all my feedback from my classmate into a table so it is easy to read and clear as to what I can improve/add to make this double page spread better.

Giving myself some of my own feedback, I am going to try and put the image of my model, Fin, on the right hand side of the double page and all the text on the left. As he is holding the crown to the left, I feel this would suit the page better and flow nicely if it is on the other side so for my second draft, I am going to attempt that. Also if the image of Fin stands out more by moving him across the page, it will portray my message of him being powerful and superior even more.