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In this task I designed a front cover for my first draft magazine. This is the feedback I got back for it.

• One of my favorite parts of the front cover is how he over lapped the letters for the Masthead of his front cover because I think it stands out on the page.
• Another part I like is the cover line (Top Rappers Of 2019) and he faded the top and bottom word behind the two middle words.
• The targets for his next draft would be to make it a bit brighter and exciting fill up the empty spaces. The background colour does not really fit and looks a bit dull.

I have taken this information in and will work on my model next draft.

What I like about my magazine is how I have laid out my Masthead and my cover line, I like the faded effect on my cover line. I think I need to change the colour of the name of my artist as it could be quite hard for some people to see.