After receiving the feedback on our draft 1, we went back to editing our video further with the very useful  critical comments we gathered. Moreover, we really tried to focus on the targets that were set and worked our way to hopefully fulfilling these in our second draft. We decided to add much wider range of footage material this time and also slightly adjusted our pace of edit to make the video a lot more interesting and exciting. Once again, despite this it is also evident that this is an incomplete draft due to the fact many places re missing footage, however we hope to fix this in our third draft.

Once again, we hope to gain the necessary feedback on this draft to really continue to put our product forward. We hope to gain constructive criticism that will enable us to improve our video once again.