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Here, we handed out feedback sheets to a few of our peers.We asked them to watch our video through and comment on what they felt needed to be improved, they all had to rate us on elements like ‘holding a shot steady’ and ‘mise-en-scene selection’. Our peers, here, had to rate whether we did each task ‘excellent’, ‘proficient’, ‘basic’ or ‘minimal’.  Once completing this section of the feedback sheet, they were then given space to right any extra comments and then a few targets. We asked each individual to complete the sheet to the best of their ability in order to receive the feedback we needed to improve our video further.

We learnt that gathering this kind of critical feedback was necessary in order to really achieve a worthwhile project that appealed to the audience we were targeting. By listening to the feedback given, we are now able to return to our video and continue to add, edit and improve the content we already have. We hope that by draft three, we have completed all of the following targets.

Targets:

• Improve the annunciation of the male performer, to ensure that the lip syncing looks professional.
• Experiment with a variety of editing techniques.
• Ensure that there is a more meaningful connection between the two performers.