This is the first 30 seconds of our performance shoot for our music video which we have edited together. I do not feel as if this is the right vibe which we intend to go for and is not suited for the particular genre. There is a difference in out first and second shoots as the performer feels more confident in one and not the other, this does not match what we want. I feel as if we need to focus on editing our clips together better with appropriate transitions as at the moment it is very rough and does not show off our potential. I am hoping to change how this looks dramatically and will be able to showcase want my intentions are.

What we need to improve on:

• camera angles
• editing
• performance
• mise-en-scene
• style which we are trying to achieve
• variety of locations throughout the summer