My First Draft

Peer Assessment

“I really like the writing as it’s catchy and exciting. Have you tried adding a pink background and having white writing it may make your front cover look more colourful  (just a suggestion) maybe move the Jess lane in huge writing a little more down so you can see her whole face? I’m happy with the amount of writing you have done as it’s not too much but it’s enough. “

Targets:

• try a different coloured masthead
• move the cover line downwards
• retouch the model’s colouring
• add a sense of urgency