Original Draft

Draft 2

In response to the targets from my first draft I’ve moved my cover line downwards to show my model’s face and also changed the colouring of the typeface to make it pop more. I’ve also retouched my cover image to make her look more vibrant and healthy, this also makes the cover a bit more exciting. Some changes I made were re-colouring her eyes and hair to give them more impact; I also saturated the whole image to get the brightest colours I could out of the image. Another piece of criticism I responded to was changing my masthead colour however this could still be deliberated depending on the feedback I get on this draft.