Here is a screencastify from my teacher to give my group some advice on what we did well and how to improve from our 3rd drafts.
What could be improved:
- Text for No Recess should be bigger and take up majority of the screen
- Change the gif graphic so it feels less repetitive
- Flip some of the scenes horizontally to help with continuity within the narrative
- Add a fade to white at the end
- Lengthen the two shot
- Try to alter the vertical hold for the band on the instrumental
In future I’ll look back at this feedback when creating my 4th draft in order to improve the quality of my video as well as also going to other people for advice on what to improve later on in future media projects that I do, both within and out of school.