This is the feedback I have recieved based on the 3rd draft of our music video. This has allowed us to have another opinion on our video and will help us improve draft 3 to be the best it can be and let us know what details and elements to improve on for the next draft.

Based on this feedback I know we need to work on getting more close ups, using more transitions and to improve the scenes with missing lip sync. This feedback is very helpful and gives us lots to work on in the future to ensure that it is good.