This is my first draft of my magazine it takes allot of inspiration from punk covers such as the sex pistols as evident by the bright neon yellows and aggressive pinks. i feel that it could use a wider variety of colors maybe something a bit more bold, i also feel it could be greatly helped if it became more busy as it looks quite empty, also my masthead shouldn’t be the same color as the background of my star so that should be remedied. I like my mise en scene with regrades to the punk aesthetic but I feel that the models pose isn’t angry or ”punk” enough it feels to tame and thoughtful.