Complete Magazine Draft 3
Here is my complete draft 3 of my magazine:
Teacher’s Feedback
So What Improvements Need To Be Made?
Front Cover
- Work on my Masthead – add words/design feature in the corners to further bring you in to the magazine. A branding or logo, ie. ‘Just Be It’ or ‘Belong’.
- Looks clunky around the models hair – try add a drop shadow or a glow to lift the image off the page.
Contents Page
- Images need something else – add rotation to the images (put them off the 90 degree).
- Don’t use the same background colour of the images (soft beige) – change it to something different like white or a gradient.
- Boxes can be a bit more zainy/wacky.
- Make title of ‘Contents’ straight and bigger – possibly repeat a smaller version of ‘Aspire’ along the top.
- Use guidelines to line up the numbers and coverlines.
- Add more stories.
- Pull out colour from the sycadellic design and drag it across the page.
Double Page Spread
- Fill green box.
- Make elaboration stronger.
- Rather than ittalice the questions, make them pop – add a drop cap, change the colour, put an outline around them.