Introduction

For my second draft of my front page I reflected on my last draft on things I didn’t like about my magazine such as a certain font I was using and the sizing of my text.

What’s New?

• I adjusted the masthead size including the first letter to be slightly bigger than the rest of the words.
• I slightly increased the main cover line.
• I changed most of my text to a more clearer font and used impact and the other was just too hard to read.
• I changed the ‘Marely brothers’ and ’40’ to Alba Matter font to make it stand out.
• The caption below the main cover lines font has been changed to match the changed writing in the pug just to stand out a little more against the dramatic font used above.
• I also added a green border around the top and righthand of the magazine.

What’s Next?

I feel like there is too much going on in the page now that have have changed things about. I think I might have to decide on eliminating one of my fonts but make sure is looks clear no matter what size font. There is also too much color I think on my page so I think that I will either get rid of so many font colors or make my cover star black and white. For now I think the best thing to do is to not over crowd my page and keep it simple but effective.

Reflection

I think analyzing my second draft was an extremely helping thing for me to do right now. I can tell my draft 2 was starting to head in the wrong direction and it has made me realize I have been trying to add to many things onto my page to make it look better when less is more and now I can try balance out my cover page and try bring attention to the things that are most important to get the buyer to want to buy it.