Draft 2 – Feedback:

After we took into consideration the feedback given in response to our first draft, we implemented the suggestions and updated our video. After we made the changes, we then posted ‘Draft 2’ of our music video. We then interviewed Brittany Chippendale an A2 Media Studies student about her thoughts on the video. We filmed the interview.

Feedback:

Click on the video below to view the feedback from Brittany on the second draft of our music video.

Summary of feedback from Brittany:

Positives:

• POV shots were used effectively
• Reaction shots are very good
• Slow motion shots of ball being kicked are very effective

Suggested changes:

• Shots of arms close to camera are too close to each other during the video
• Work more on a high energy feeling

My analysis:

The feedback was encouraging and positive, with very useful suggestions that we will implement before our final draft. I am particularly happy that the POV shots were praised highly, as they make up the majority of the narrative aspect of our music video.

Notes:

The slow motion shots were particularly praised. In this draft the slow motion shots were not high quality, we will re-film these in higher quality and then add them to our video.