This is the second draft of my music magazine BD (Breakdown):

For my second draft I have made a few changes. For example:

• I have taken the white off the red and purple writing
• I have changed the font of “ABE”
• I have taken out a picture since I felt like it wasn’t adding anything to my magazine
• I have changed the bar-code to be horizontal
• I have made my Masthead bigger
• I have made my Main Cover star bigger
• I have changed the font of the Plugs

I feel like this makes my magazine come together more so it looks more professional. Everything looks like it is meant to be there.

Targets for draft 3:

• Make the bar-code thicker
• Make the masthead smaller since it is too close to my models eyes
• Change the colour purple since it is clashing with the other colours
• Make my plug bigger
• Make my Main Cover star bigger