For this task I had to make improvements from my first draft of my music magazine front cover. I looked at my peer assessment to see what other people thought would look better.

These are the things I have done to change. First of all I thought I would look for different background colours because the old one did not really suit my front cover, I thought this light blue looks better behind my model and blends well with the yellow. Another thing they thought I needed to do was fill up the page a bit more, I decided I’d include a plug to make the reader a bit more interested in the magazine, in the plug I put “GET READY FOR 2020, WE ARE.” I thought this would keep the reader excited for future magazines and this would make them wanna get more of our magazines. Another point to add on to make it better is that I could move the cover lines away from the face of my front cover model.