Positives and Feedback

+ Interesting Concept

+ MES will be a large factor

+ Good use of sets

+ Narrative and Performance are combined

+ Will have good editing

+ Well known band but a lesser known song

 

– Maybe another actor or two needed to add to narrative

-Need more detail on what props will be used

-MES needs to be worked on

-Finalize choice of set

-Will need close ups on the toys, to keep interest

-Decide on costume design