Further improvements…

• Make some of the clips shorter to keep attention and interest.
• Add colour filters.
• Crop out on some of the videos, to avoid background distractions.

I looked at another students music video and used the criteria to mark there work, overall it was a good video with numerous locations, angles and transitions. Here are some improvements that could’ve been made: more filters and some narrative could’ve been added to create more of a story. This video is similar to ours in the sense that it has a large percent of performance, the genre seems similar as the star is wearing a luxurious dress with jewellry, this video gives us an idea of what we need to work on such as shortening some of our clips.