For this second draft of my double page spread I added some gradient graphics to the background to make the writing and images standout more on the pages, I also used the same image of nate from the contents page to test and see if it was better in the DPS or the Contents page.

improvements:

• needs to be filled more
• a little bit boring
• more text

what went well:

• better use of colors
• better images
• overall better layout