Here is my draft 4 for the music video, this will be the last draft before the final version so draft 4 right now is at its best. All the footage has been put in and everything is lip-synced well. Reflection : 

There needs to be more of the special effects I had like the heart, so if I could include more effects like that in the final draft I feel like they would fit in much better. I also think that I just need a few more small shots here and there.

Here is the screen-castify of my media teacher feedback to my Draft 3 of the music video, My teacher makes many good points to improve on and other ways to make my draft 4 the best it could be. Overall most of the points are minor improvements that I could make while editing but some of them would need entire reshoots of some scenes. but it could be done, but only if the weather is favorable

Feedback :

• Make boxes even or make them look good while uneven
• More shots to space out when the song doesn’t sing(closes ups)
• Re-shoot blurry shots
• More heart graphics
• More cuts between narrative
• Maybe more shots of the guitarist and singer together

Here is my Draft 3 for my music video, in this version the whole narrative has been put in and has been put in some form of order but it can still be rearranged and made to fit the music more. So for draft 4, I need to go through and adjust all of the of the footage as well as add in the rest of the effects and such, so hopefully everything should be in order for draft 3.

Where did you go? How did it go?

I went back to my house in St Martins and filmed in my kitchen and back garden, it went well, I was able to get my family to help me with some of the shoots like using my sister as a stand-in for the ghost.

Reflect – what went well? what went badly?

I got all the shots that I wanted at that moment and I was able to fill up a lot of space in my music video, but sadly not all the footage looked the best, it got dark very quickly and I had to shoot at that time so some of the footage has a bit of a blur or a grain effect over the top, or it’s just not focused properly

Focus forward – do you need to pick up shots? how does this help represent your star image?

I think that I could get a few replacement shots and make some improvements,  for example, the scene of the ghost poking over the fence should be shot from a different angle, in better lighting, and using a tripod, and maybe a different lens

Below is the second draft of my music video, in this draft I still have empty space but I have included some narrative shots like me in the kitchen, opening up the fridge and the bread box. below here is my “self-assessment sheet” I rewatched the video and marked myself on how I thought I did, there are definitely parts that need improvements, for example my transitions are basically non-existent and I kept forgetting to bring the tripod with me to shoots so some shots are wobbly and shakey.

For my next draft (draft 3) i should have enough footage to fill in the whole video and I can start working on making the singers sync and the narrative footage sync with the beat of the song