What’s New?

• PNG has been flipped and repositioned
• ‘Too big for my boots?’ The text has been altered so that ‘BIG’ and ‘NEVER’ are more striking
• Layout- I have moved my standfirst, one of the quotes and the star’s name in an attempt to make a more aesthetically pleasing page
• Added text ‘Continued on Page 26’
• Changed article font to a serif font
• Page numbers in the corners

What’s next?

• Turn off hyphens on my text to remain consistent with article conventions
• Altered colour scheme so that it isn’t identical to contents page
• Possibly pull more quotes or emphasize the bold ones further
• Move the star name so that it blocks less of the star image.
• Move byline so it doesn’t seem out of place
• Drop capital

Evaluating my second draft has helped me to self criticise my work and see how aesthetics on the page work together.