Working on the final draft after teacher input

here is the teacher feedback Screencastify on our draft 3 music video

The feedback we received:

• Close up of the lips to go somewhere else 
• For jumpcut – in the foreground, in the middle, nearly there, or else it looks weird. 
• Reverse shots of them reading. 
• Start with the single shot of them holding magazines. 
• Sequencing of up and down with newspapers needs sorting. 
• Efx when they change. 
• Cut laying down into the dancing part.
• Make the shots appear to be more modern and funky with colour and effects

Next draft I will look at cutting actions that don’t need to be long or really shown. Cutting out or cutting down the unnecessary parts will cause the exciting areas to stand out further and it will ensure there are more of them. With the knowledge on how I can start perfecting the actual narrative in the video and where I should be cutting to the performance or the narrative I can now dive into adding some quirky special effects and transitions.